Introduction:
Good evening everyone. I’m so pleased to be here and to have the opportunity to speak with you all today. I’d like to talk about an ironic habit that we humans have: running faster when we’ve lost our way.
Humorous Analogy
Have you ever been in a situation where you were lost and you just start running in any direction, hoping that it would take you somewhere? Well, that’s what I’m talking about when it comes to humans and our ironic habit of running faster when we have lost our way.
It’s like when you’re trying to find a way out of a maze. You find yourself in a dead end and you panic, so you start running in any direction, hoping it will take you somewhere. But in the end, you find yourself back in the same spot again. That’s what I mean by running faster when you have lost your way.
Examples
Let’s look at a few examples of this ironic habit of ours. Have you ever been in a situation where you were trying to reach a goal but it seemed like you were running in circles? You thought you were making progress but in reality, you were just getting further and further away from your goal. That’s an example of running faster when we have lost our way.
Or what about when you’re trying to find someone? You call them up but they don’t answer, so you start running around trying to find them, but in the end, you still can’t find them. That’s another example of this ironic habit.
Conclusion:
So that’s what I mean when I talk about humans and their ironic habit of running faster when we have lost our way. I hope you enjoyed this comical speech. Remember, it’s important to take a step back and assess the situation before you start running. That way, you can avoid this ironic habit and reach your goal instead. Thank you for your time and have a great evening.
Feedback for the Speaker
I appreciate the speaker for delivering an informative and humorous speech that is both educational and entertaining. The speaker has successfully incorporated the use of humour to make the speech more engaging, as well as to illustrate the point of the speech. Furthermore, the speaker has also effectively used examples to further explain the concept.
Strengths of the Speech
Humour: The speaker has used humour effectively in the speech to make it more entertaining and engaging for the audience. The humorous analogy used at the beginning of the speech successfully set the tone for the rest of the speech. This allowed the speaker to grab the audience’s attention and keep it throughout the speech.
Examples: The speaker has effectively used examples to explain the concept further. This enabled the audience to better understand the concept and relate to the examples provided. By providing concrete examples, the speaker was able to connect and engage with the audience.
Conclusion: The speaker has effectively concluded the speech by reiterating the main point of the speech and providing a takeaway point for the audience to remember. The conclusion also provided a sense of closure to the speech.
Areas of Improvement
Structure: The speaker can further improve the structure of the speech by using subheadings to separate the various sections of the speech. This would make the speech easier to follow and to understand. Furthermore, it would also make the speech appear more organized and professional. For example, the speaker could use subheadings such as ‘Introduction’, ‘Humorous Analogy’, ‘Examples’, and ‘Conclusion’.
Language: The speaker can further improve the language of the speech by using more concise language. By using simple and concise language, the speaker can ensure that the audience is able to understand the speech easily. Furthermore, it would also make the speech sound smoother and more polished. For example, instead of saying “I’m so pleased to be here and to have the opportunity to speak with you all today”, the speaker could say “I’m pleased to be here and speak with you all today”.