Introduction
Good morning friends and family. Today I am here to talk about something that has been weighing heavily on my heart and mind for some time now. The phrase I want to discuss is “more law, less justice”.
The Problem
The problem is that, despite our best efforts, our justice system is not delivering justice to everyone equally. Instead, we are seeing more laws and more regulations that are creating inequality and injustice.
Examples of Inequality
Let me give you a few examples of this inequality. First, we know that people of color are more likely to be arrested and imprisoned than their white counterparts. This is due to the fact that they are more likely to be stopped by police and more likely to be charged with harsher sentences.
Another example is the fact that people who are financially disadvantaged are more likely to be caught in a cycle of poverty. They are less likely to have access to legal representation or the resources to fight their cases.
The Impact
It is important to recognize the impact that this inequality has on our society. People of color and those living in poverty are more likely to be victims of crime and less likely to receive justice. This injustice has far-reaching implications, from a lack of trust in our justice system to a decrease in public safety.
Conclusion
It is time for us to take action and ensure justice for all. We must work together to create a justice system that is fair and equitable for everyone. Let us strive for more justice and less law. Together, we can create a better future for ourselves and for our communities. Thank you.
Feedback for the Speaker
Appreciation
I appreciate the speaker for effectively delivering an informative and inspiring speech on an important topic. The purpose of the speech was fulfilled, with the speaker providing relevant examples and encouraging the audience to take action.
Strengths
The speech had a clear purpose, and the speaker was able to effectively achieve this purpose by using a variety of public speaking techniques. One such technique is the use of rhetorical questions to engage the audience, such as “It is important to recognize the impact that this inequality has on our society?” This helps to draw the audience’s attention and encourages them to think more deeply about the issue.
The speaker also used the appeals of pathos, logos, and ethos to convince the audience of the importance of the issue and to persuade them to take action. By using personal anecdotes and statistics, the speaker was able to provide evidence of the injustice and inequality that exists in our justice system while also providing encouragement and hope for a better future.
Areas of Improvement
The speaker could have further engaged the audience by providing more examples of inequality and injustice. By providing more examples, the speaker would have been able to better illustrate the issue and its impact. Additionally, the speaker could have included a call to action at the end of the speech. This could have included specific suggestions for how the audience can create a more equitable justice system. For example, the speaker could have suggested that the audience speaks up and advocates for change, or educates others on their rights and responsibilities in the justice system.
Overall, the speaker was able to effectively deliver the speech and achieve its purpose. With some further improvements, the speaker would be able to further engage the audience and make a more lasting impact.