Good evening everyone,
I’m here to talk to you about entrepreneurs and money. We’re living in a time when entrepreneurs are more open to receiving outside investments. This is a great thing for entrepreneurs and for the economy.
Let me tell you about a few of the benefits of taking on investments. First, it can open up opportunities for entrepreneurs that would otherwise be unavailable. For example, a small business owner may not have the funds to expand their operations, but with outside investments, they can.
Second, investments can help entrepreneurs to create more jobs. When entrepreneurs are able to expand their operations, they can hire more people. This is great for the economy, as it helps to create more jobs and more opportunities.
Finally, investments can help entrepreneurs to take their businesses to the next level. For example, an entrepreneur may be able to use the funds to develop new products or services, or to expand into new markets.
So as you can see, taking on investments can be beneficial for entrepreneurs and for the economy.
It’s important to remember that investments come with risks. Before taking on investments, entrepreneurs should make sure that they have a plan in place to manage those risks.
At the end of the day, taking on investments can be a great opportunity for entrepreneurs. It can open up new opportunities, create jobs, and help entrepreneurs take their businesses to the next level.
So let’s all embrace this new trend and support entrepreneurs who are willing to take on investments.
Thank you for your time.
Feedback for the Speaker
Thank you for your speech on entrepreneurs and money. You did a great job in discussing the benefits of taking on investments and the risks that come with it.
Your speech had many strengths. Firstly, you were well-prepared and were able to clearly articulate your points. You used concrete examples to illustrate the benefits of taking on investments, which helped to engage the audience. Secondly, you used rhetorical questions to draw the audience in and make them think. Lastly, you ended your speech with a call to action, which was effective in motivating the audience.
There are a few areas of improvement that could be made. Firstly, you could have used more storytelling to illustrate your points, as this could have helped to make the speech more memorable and engaging. For example, you could have shared a story about an entrepreneur who was able to expand their operations and create more jobs with the help of investments. Secondly, you could have used more vocal variety to keep the audience engaged. For example, you could have varied your pitch and volume to emphasize certain points.
Overall, you did a great job in delivering your speech. Keep up the good work and continue to practice to improve your public speaking skills.