Introduction
Good morning everyone. It’s a pleasure to be speaking with all of you today.
The Power of the Present
I’m sure we all agree that the past is a powerful teacher. We’ve all heard the expression, “those who do not learn from history are doomed to repeat it”.
But, what I’d like to address today is the power of the present. As the saying goes, “You can never plan the future by the past”.
This means that when it comes to our personal and professional journeys, we must be willing to take risks. We must be willing to let go of the past and embrace new possibilities.
Creating a New Path
I’m reminded of a story about a woman who was struggling to find her purpose in life. She felt like she was stuck in a rut and nothing seemed to be changing.
One day, she decided to take a risk and move to a new city. She decided to create a new path for herself.
It wasn’t easy. She faced many fears and uncertainties. But, she had the courage to keep going and eventually, she found the success she was searching for.
This story reminds us that it’s never too late to start anew. We can always create a new path for ourselves and find success.
Conclusion
To conclude, don’t let the past determine your future. Take risks, be brave, and have faith in yourself.
No matter what situation you find yourself in, you can always create a new path and discover your true potential.
Thank you for your time and attention. Have a wonderful day!
Feedback for the Speaker
Appreciation:
I appreciate the speaker’s effort in delivering this speech. The message was clear and the purpose was clear. The speaker’s enthusiasm and confidence was evident.
Strengths:
The speech had several strengths. Firstly, the speaker created an engaging introduction by addressing the audience and stating the purpose of the speech.
The speaker then presented the main idea of the speech in an effective way. They used a story to illustrate the point and the story was relevant to the message.
The conclusion was effective because the speaker summarised the main points and ended with an encouraging note.
The language used was clear and concise. The speaker avoided using overly complex words or sentences.
Areas of Improvement:
The speech could be improved by adding more body language to it. The speaker used minimal gestures and movements which could be more expressive.
The speaker could also use more vocal variety. The speaker spoke in a monotonous tone which did not engage the audience. Varying the pitch and speaking with enthusiasm would help to keep the audience attentive.
The speech could also be improved by elaborating the story and adding more examples. This would help to improve the clarity of the message and keep the audience interested.
Overall, the speaker did a great job in delivering the speech. With some practice and some tips for improvement, the speaker will be able to make the speech more engaging and effective.